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== Comments from Tiziana Ferrari (EGI.eu) on 1 Aug 2011 ==
 
== Comments from Tiziana Ferrari (EGI.eu) on 1 Aug 2011 ==
  
*Article 2: provides a pointer to the policies, but not to the procedures (https://wiki.egi.eu/wiki/EGI_CSIRT:Policies#EGI_Operational_Security_procedures
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#Article 2: provides a pointer to the policies, but not to the procedures (https://wiki.egi.eu/wiki/EGI_CSIRT:Policies#EGI_Operational_Security_procedures
 
or alternatively https://wiki.egi.eu/wiki/Operational_Procedures#Security)
 
or alternatively https://wiki.egi.eu/wiki/Operational_Procedures#Security)
*Article 2: the subject who has to enforce the compliance is "You" or "You" AND "any Resource Centres involved in operating your Service"? in the latter case I would keep You and any Resource Centres together in the sentence
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#Article 2: the subject who has to enforce the compliance is "You" or "You" AND "any Resource Centres involved in operating your Service"? in the latter case I would keep You and any Resource Centres together in the sentence
*Article 3: "by the Infrastructure and by any Resource Centres". The "Infrastructure" includes the "Resource Centre"? it seems not, as Infrastructure and Resource Centre are mentioned separately.
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#Article 3: "by the Infrastructure and by any Resource Centres". The "Infrastructure" includes the "Resource Centre"? it seems not, as Infrastructure and Resource Centre are mentioned separately.
  
 
Also, according to the glossary "The term IT Infrastructure includes all of the information technology but not the associated people, Processes and documentation." If we follow this definition, the following statement does not seem correct "You are held responsible by the Infrastructure".
 
Also, according to the glossary "The term IT Infrastructure includes all of the information technology but not the associated people, Processes and documentation." If we follow this definition, the following statement does not seem correct "You are held responsible by the Infrastructure".
 
I see a similar problem in Article 10 which says "The Infrastructure and any Resource Centres involved may control your access to the Infrastructure or Resource Centres"
 
I see a similar problem in Article 10 which says "The Infrastructure and any Resource Centres involved may control your access to the Infrastructure or Resource Centres"
*Article 11: "Disputes resulting from your participation in the Infrastructure will be resolved according to the Infrastructure escalation procedures" -> reference missing to the procedures applicable in this case?
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#Article 11: "Disputes resulting from your participation in the Infrastructure will be resolved according to the Infrastructure escalation procedures" -> reference missing to the procedures applicable in this case?
  
 
= Comment on the draft text of site operations policy =
 
= Comment on the draft text of site operations policy =

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